Wednesday, July 11, 2007

Feathered Friends

feathers fly -
a lump in the road
bloodied

Haiku for One Deep Breath

7 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

oh gosh, so much tragedy in so few words!

jem said...

Powerful, visual, striking. Good to read a darker take on the theme.

AnnieElf said...

Birds and cars. Been there. Very upsetting when it happens.

the heartful blogger said...

Wow, so immediately visceral. Poor bird.

tumblewords said...

Ouch. Darn. Lots of feelings packed into those few words!

Clare said...

Life and death, just a second apart -- your haiku is perfect.

sage said...

now that's a depressing haiku!